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The Rush

03:05 Nov 30 2008
Times Read: 590


I see you look at me from across the room

I see the curiousness in your eyes

The thirst I can feel IT, IT's always inside

I know you want me, I can feel your presence

Your there in front of me with wanting eyes

I see IT in you, the thirst you can't hide

Your fingertips run down my arm, Shivers run down my spine

I want you more, I know you want me too

I can see it in your eyes, they tell me everything

You lay me softly on the bed

The pillow where you lay my delicate head

I feel the weight of your warm body on top of me

As you run your fingertips along the nape of my neck

My heart races faster, faster than before

They reach just above my pantyline

It sends a rush through my body

I feel your breath on my neck, your lips so soft

I take in a deep breath when i feel the pain

As i relax you take me to the most beautiful place

You pull back gently as my heart still races

I touch your cheek softly and whisper "I Love You"

You lift me up gently and hold me in your arms

I embrace this moment for I never want it to end

-BreAnna Altum



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GobletOfBlood
GobletOfBlood
23:21 Nov 30 2008

you can just feel that passion... i like it...





Lordpeace
Lordpeace
22:27 Mar 20 2009

oh nice images dear





 

The Thirst

02:54 Nov 30 2008
Times Read: 591


I sit there all alone in the dark

Thoughts racing in my head

Holding that sharp dagger to my wrist

Sometimes wishing I was dead

I cry and scream but no one's there

This thirst for pain is taking over

Sometimes I have no control

It's this raging monster inside of me

Trying to scream but I can't breathe

The tears burn so bad I can't even see

I wish he was here with me

Only he will understand

To wrap his arms around me and whisper "it's ok"

I want him to hold me

I want to take his reached out hand

I want to be loved, I don't want to be numb

As I watch the blood trickle down my arm

I hunger for a deeper thirst

I try to fight IT but IT always wins

As I lick the blood from my arm the darkness takes over

I taste it on my tongue, it's the sweetest thing

I've had enough but I just can't stop

I fight IT and fight IT then I pull myself back

I want more but i feel too weak

I feel like a monster so i ask myself "WHY"

The answer is easy "The Darkness Of The Thirst WIll Always Win"

-BreAnna Altum



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GobletOfBlood
GobletOfBlood
23:22 Nov 30 2008

great poem... it had a nice flow... great...





Lordpeace
Lordpeace
22:28 Mar 20 2009

wonderful i have one called "the hunger"








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